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Well hi. I'm Solomon Caine. It's very nice to meet you.
*The Doctor pops in from off screen* Alright you, stop flirting.
*Hurt face* I was only saying hello.
For you it's the same thing.
Okay, now that that's out of the way, I'm sorry. I had to. I couldn't let this little upstart show me up.
Okay, I'm done with my various rants. Um...
Okay, bearings gathered.
This is very cute, and I love the blush. It really could do with a background. That'd make this 20% cooler, but is not necessary. I see an attempt at shadowing, but a lack of thorough shading. I only see shading on the legs farthest from the viewer, the same on the back pony (Who I assume is Masquerade, don't hate for getting it wrong). Where's the light source? Shouldn't only half of the back leg be shaded on the back pony? Sorry if I seem a little lost. Also the rest of his flank is shaded as well. There's also missing the shadowing from the hair and raised hoof.
Still in all, that being the only thing I see that can use improvement, you're doing great. I wish I could draw this well, but I fail at it. I don't see anything that creates an incongruity in the lines.The lines are smooth, creating a definite picture. Keep up the good work.
*The Doctor pops in from off screen* Alright you, stop flirting.
*Hurt face* I was only saying hello.
For you it's the same thing.
Okay, now that that's out of the way, I'm sorry. I had to. I couldn't let this little upstart show me up.
Okay, I'm done with my various rants. Um...
Okay, bearings gathered.
This is very cute, and I love the blush. It really could do with a background. That'd make this 20% cooler, but is not necessary. I see an attempt at shadowing, but a lack of thorough shading. I only see shading on the legs farthest from the viewer, the same on the back pony (Who I assume is Masquerade, don't hate for getting it wrong). Where's the light source? Shouldn't only half of the back leg be shaded on the back pony? Sorry if I seem a little lost. Also the rest of his flank is shaded as well. There's also missing the shadowing from the hair and raised hoof.
Still in all, that being the only thing I see that can use improvement, you're doing great. I wish I could draw this well, but I fail at it. I don't see anything that creates an incongruity in the lines.The lines are smooth, creating a definite picture. Keep up the good work.